These poem creates a haunting triptych of longing that moves from intimate closeness to painful distance with devastating emotional precision. The progression from "lay your head on my thighs" in the first poem to "we're farther than the ocean" in the third captures the heartbreaking arc of love dissolving despite physical proximity. Your imagery of "golden strings" versus "coldest of blues" and the recurring motif of reaching—whether to clean dust from a heart or into shadows—creates a visceral sense of someone trying desperately to bridge an unbridgeable gap, making the reader feel that ache of loving someone who won't let you close enough to truly connect.
Aweh!🤙 The most beautiful Place of Poetry that is So Aweh!♊🎤🤲🤙 https://www.soundcloud.com/kurubete-sisa-vamoshe/tracks 👑🌎🤞📚🎧📖💌☮️ This Poetry Society Session are the May/June Responsibility of The Success of The Space-X Launch 2025! Aweh!
literal chills. more of this Plath-esque poetry pleaseeee
thank you for reading <3 and i will write more of it i promise:)
still i fear
my will is stronger
than your indifference
my strings are made of golden
Am i at a negative level of poetry?? What beautiful piece of art this is!
thank you!! <3
i love this ugh so gorgeous
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Late night reading like this makes insomnia worth it, keep up the incredible work dearie!
thank you <3!!
These poem creates a haunting triptych of longing that moves from intimate closeness to painful distance with devastating emotional precision. The progression from "lay your head on my thighs" in the first poem to "we're farther than the ocean" in the third captures the heartbreaking arc of love dissolving despite physical proximity. Your imagery of "golden strings" versus "coldest of blues" and the recurring motif of reaching—whether to clean dust from a heart or into shadows—creates a visceral sense of someone trying desperately to bridge an unbridgeable gap, making the reader feel that ache of loving someone who won't let you close enough to truly connect.
thank you so much for reading <3
I'm in love with your writing! Literally any time something about the sky is mentioned in poetry (clouds, stars, etc) a fairy is born
thank you for reading love <3 and yes, i agree🙏🏻
Stunning
you are stunning
This counts as flirting btw
i loved this sooooo much
this is literally so beautiful
thank you so much for reading love 💗💗💗
literal chills, teach me your ways of writing please, i'm bowing down (literally and metaphorically)
thank you so much !!!😖💗💗
Aweh!🤙 The most beautiful Place of Poetry that is So Aweh!♊🎤🤲🤙 https://www.soundcloud.com/kurubete-sisa-vamoshe/tracks 👑🌎🤞📚🎧📖💌☮️ This Poetry Society Session are the May/June Responsibility of The Success of The Space-X Launch 2025! Aweh!